Letter

Hello friends ! Now ai want to make a letter about my holiday.
here it is

Dear Lia,
I went to Bali on vacation. Do you know where Lovina is? it's in Bali. it's a beautiful beach. I played send castle with my brother. we ate lunch at the beach. I met a new friend there. After that I went to the mall there, My brother played paraselling. my friend and I ate fried rice on Lovina beach.