Journal and Reflection

Friday, 11 March 2016

  I took writing class for this semester. I had learned many things in writing class such as kind of nouns, pronouns, sentences, prepositions, adjectives and adverbs. Not only that, I learned how to write my experiences, how to describe someone and the last thing I learned was how to write chronological order on a blog.

So far in this writing class, I got a few difficult things. Such when I wrote "Autobiography". I got misunderstanding about how to write chronological order. I made many mistakes, so I made many changes on my post. I got difficulties to improve my story. I often careless about the grammar, punctuation, spacing, paragraph and also capital letters. Sometimes I confused about the correct vocabulary too. I think I must more carefull when I put a punctuation, capital letters and I think I must more improve my vocabulary.It is very usefull because maybe someday we can apply it when we write the comment in blog of someone. Maybe after we got writing knowledge we can be a writer.

For the Mid test in writing I want to be careful about that and study hard to be successful in writing test.

Autobiography

                                         Autobiography
About Me : Aveline Meliantha
I'm Indonesian. I live in Surabaya. Surabaya is  a  big city in East Java. I go to Widya Mandala University.I am studying English. I like singing, dancing, and playing the piano. Playing piano is good and fun. I don't watch TV. I watch movies sometimes. I don't like horor movies I like palying the piano. I like listening to classical music. My hobby is playing the piano. Every Monday I take the piano lesson for 30 minutes. My favourite food is fried rice.My favourite dessert is ice cream. I like Chocolate ice cream. My favourite singer is Alicia Keys. She is beautiful. I have a best friend. My best friend's name is Grace. She is kind and very beautiful. She is 9 years old. she is very young. She is energettic. Now i want to tell about my physical description. I have a flat nose. I have a long -black hair. I am short. I have small eyes. I am shy. I have thin eyebrows.I am wearing glasses and a watch. My favourite songs are " gee, never on Sunday etc. I have a good neighbour . His name is Adam. He is korean.
He is an acupuncturist and we have ever taken his therapy several times.
He is really a kind man who wants to help others at any time at anywhere. I love him very much. but he has some problem. He is a very poor bahasa speaker. there fore whenever he wants to do something in indonesia, he needs an indonesian speaker ie.. the interpreter. it may be very inconvinient for him but i seldom study hahasa. his bahasa ability is all the same as when he came here for the first time 2 years ago. He much try to study bahasa.
he always says "makanan indonesia enak selkali sekali~!" maybe that is the reason why he is not so slim.
I want to be a fluent english speaker like him. his bahasa english is really good.
maybe someday i think i can be a good speaker.
If i become a good english speaker, than i want to be an interpreter and want to travel all around the world including korea and japan and all the europian counties.
some day, i maybe standing on the Efel tower in London. untill the day, i will study thisenglish hard and hard.That 's all about my autobiography.

Assigment III : Describing My Friend

Hello friend , this is my post about describing my relatives.

 I usually make friends easily, so I have a lot of friends – schoolmates, neighbours, relatives. I can’t imagine my life without them. But there is one, who will always be in the first place in my heart. Her name is Gracia  and she is my closest friend. her nick name is Grace. Her full name is Lucia Gratia Christiana. Her hobby is singing.

 

   She  is 9 years old, and she is very kind to other people, Now I want to tell you about her. She is beautiful and little bit short. She has beautiful and big eyes, She has a pointed nose, she has long hair, She is very smart. She can sing very beautifuly. She has thick eyebrows, She is very nice. She is very smart and she has many friends and she is very cute girl. She is a student. she is very energetic and in the school she is very diligent. She is very active in the church. There are so many activities for her and also sing a song with english very nicely. 




I will send a picture for Gracia to email. Thank you and see you. bye....