MY Wonderful Holiday

When I was in 6 grade in elementary school , I went to Bali. I went to Bali with my big family.  We were there for five days. I had many impressive experiences during the vacation. I went to Bali by car.  First day, we visited Sanur Beach in the morning. We saw the beautiful sunrise together. It was a great scenery. Then, we checked in to the hotel. After prepared our selves, we went to Tanah Lot. We met so many other tourists there. 

They were not only domestic but also foreign tourists. Second day, we enjoyed the day on Tanjung Benoa beach. We played so many water sports such as banana boat, jetsky, speedboat etc. We also went to Penyu island to see many unique animals. They were turtles, snakes, and sea birds. We were very happy. In the afternoon, we went to Kuta Beach to see the amazing sunset and enjoyed the beautiful wave. The last day , we spent our time in Sangeh. 

We could enjoy the green and shady forest. There were so many monkies. They were so tame but sometimes they could be naughty. We could make a close interaction with them. After that, we went to Sukowati market for shopping and joger . That was my lovely time. I bought some Bali T-Shirt and souvenirs. In the evening, we had to check out from the hotel. We went back home bringing so many amazing memories of Bali. It’s a wonderful time of Holiday in Bali.

My Reflection

Hello friends ! Now I want to post  about reflection in the second semester.

Hi! I have got a lot of knowledge about writing like how to make blogg, how to make a story , and how to post the blogger. This is the first time for me to use the blogger. In my blog i can write about my postcard , tell about the funny story, post about describing people, and story about my holiday.And also I can make narattive text. I am very happy because I have a lot of friends. I love writing also. My hobby is make a daily dairy. I think that's all about my reflection in the second semester. See you all my friends. GOOD BYE !

Letter

Hello friends ! Now ai want to make a letter about my holiday.
here it is

Dear Lia,
I went to Bali on vacation. Do you know where Lovina is? it's in Bali. it's a beautiful beach. I played send castle with my brother. we ate lunch at the beach. I met a new friend there. After that I went to the mall there, My brother played paraselling. my friend and I ate fried rice on Lovina beach.

Describing Fashion Style

She is wearing blue batik. She is wearing black jeans and wearing flat shoes. Blue is always a fashionable color. I think blue batik is formal coustum for a woman. She is wearing earings. I sometimes wear batik on Friday. I sometimes wear formal cloth. I think that 's all about describing fashion style.

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Journal and Reflection

Friday, 11 March 2016

  I took writing class for this semester. I had learned many things in writing class such as kind of nouns, pronouns, sentences, prepositions, adjectives and adverbs. Not only that, I learned how to write my experiences, how to describe someone and the last thing I learned was how to write chronological order on a blog.

So far in this writing class, I got a few difficult things. Such when I wrote "Autobiography". I got misunderstanding about how to write chronological order. I made many mistakes, so I made many changes on my post. I got difficulties to improve my story. I often careless about the grammar, punctuation, spacing, paragraph and also capital letters. Sometimes I confused about the correct vocabulary too. I think I must more carefull when I put a punctuation, capital letters and I think I must more improve my vocabulary.It is very usefull because maybe someday we can apply it when we write the comment in blog of someone. Maybe after we got writing knowledge we can be a writer.

For the Mid test in writing I want to be careful about that and study hard to be successful in writing test.

Autobiography

                                         Autobiography
About Me : Aveline Meliantha
I'm Indonesian. I live in Surabaya. Surabaya is  a  big city in East Java. I go to Widya Mandala University.I am studying English. I like singing, dancing, and playing the piano. Playing piano is good and fun. I don't watch TV. I watch movies sometimes. I don't like horor movies I like palying the piano. I like listening to classical music. My hobby is playing the piano. Every Monday I take the piano lesson for 30 minutes. My favourite food is fried rice.My favourite dessert is ice cream. I like Chocolate ice cream. My favourite singer is Alicia Keys. She is beautiful. I have a best friend. My best friend's name is Grace. She is kind and very beautiful. She is 9 years old. she is very young. She is energettic. Now i want to tell about my physical description. I have a flat nose. I have a long -black hair. I am short. I have small eyes. I am shy. I have thin eyebrows.I am wearing glasses and a watch. My favourite songs are " gee, never on Sunday etc. I have a good neighbour . His name is Adam. He is korean.
He is an acupuncturist and we have ever taken his therapy several times.
He is really a kind man who wants to help others at any time at anywhere. I love him very much. but he has some problem. He is a very poor bahasa speaker. there fore whenever he wants to do something in indonesia, he needs an indonesian speaker ie.. the interpreter. it may be very inconvinient for him but i seldom study hahasa. his bahasa ability is all the same as when he came here for the first time 2 years ago. He much try to study bahasa.
he always says "makanan indonesia enak selkali sekali~!" maybe that is the reason why he is not so slim.
I want to be a fluent english speaker like him. his bahasa english is really good.
maybe someday i think i can be a good speaker.
If i become a good english speaker, than i want to be an interpreter and want to travel all around the world including korea and japan and all the europian counties.
some day, i maybe standing on the Efel tower in London. untill the day, i will study thisenglish hard and hard.That 's all about my autobiography.

Assigment III : Describing My Friend

Hello friend , this is my post about describing my relatives.

 I usually make friends easily, so I have a lot of friends – schoolmates, neighbours, relatives. I can’t imagine my life without them. But there is one, who will always be in the first place in my heart. Her name is Gracia  and she is my closest friend. her nick name is Grace. Her full name is Lucia Gratia Christiana. Her hobby is singing.

 

   She  is 9 years old, and she is very kind to other people, Now I want to tell you about her. She is beautiful and little bit short. She has beautiful and big eyes, She has a pointed nose, she has long hair, She is very smart. She can sing very beautifuly. She has thick eyebrows, She is very nice. She is very smart and she has many friends and she is very cute girl. She is a student. she is very energetic and in the school she is very diligent. She is very active in the church. There are so many activities for her and also sing a song with english very nicely. 




I will send a picture for Gracia to email. Thank you and see you. bye....

My beautiful HomeTown

        Life is meaningful: My Home Town Surabaya

Hello Friends , This is my third post about my home town in Surabya.
Surabaya is where I live. Surabaya is a Hero city. It is a capital city of east Java,Indonesia.
There are a lot  of interesting places here. I really like staying in my hometown. I have many relatives who live in Surabaya. My grandparents lived in Surabaya too. In surabaya there are so many tourist, malls, hotels, and apartements.

Further,here are some interesting places in Surabaya

Submarine Monument: An historical tourist attraction in the bank of Kalimas is worth to visit to expose the history of KRI Pasopati with side number 410. Visitors can enter and explore the 76m length , 6,3m width and 1,048kgs weight submarine. This monument is at Pemuda street and easily accessible
Four faces Budha Statue : Its height is 9m and total building height from down to top is 36m. Most Budha,Kong Hu Chu and Tao believers pray at this statue. Its location is at Sukolilo street which is in New Kenjeran beach area. In surabaya there are so many Shopping area. I like going to the mall with my family. Now , i want to tell you about Shopping area at Surabaya.

Shopping area

Traffic in a Surabaya street in 1958 as seen from Dutch Trading Company building

Surabaya is a major shopping destination for Indonesians, and there are several large shopping malls in the city such as BG Junction, Ciputra World Surabaya, City Of Tomorrow, Galaxy Mall, Grand City, Jembatan Merah Plaza, Kapas Krampung Plaza, Lenmarc, Plaza Surabaya, Plaza Tunjungan, Royal Plaza Surabaya, Supermal Pakuwon Indah, and Surabaya Town Square.
Hi-Tech Mall, WTC, and Plasa Marina are the major shopping centers in Surabaya for gadgets, computers and mobile phones.
In West Surabaya, Citraland by the Ciputra Group and Graha Family consists of residences, an apartment complex, a golf course and a climbing gym.
In East Surabaya, Pakuwon City by the Pakuwon Group has its own dining out spot, called Food Festival, and it is developing more facilities, such as the East Coast Center.

Funny Real story

                   FUNNY REAL STORY
                          So embarrassing until now

It happened when my friend was in high school student.
It was quite a long time ago.
But even today, my friend face becomes red and feels embarrassed whenever he remind of it.


Fifty years ago, my friend lived in a city called INCHON.
There was an open swimming pool far away from his house. It was actually in the sea.

The pool owner made it inside of the sea.
So it was very nice,and water was clean though water was a bit salty.
he and his friends often used to go there for a swimming. my friend used to go there by bus. it was the first time of diving from 5 m high. he saw the water below. it looked very far from my  friend and the color of the water was very dark as if the deep hell water. it was very scary.... but my friend was stupid and absurd enough to neglect the risk of breaking his waist. after he finished checking once more that lots of girl were watching him, my friend bravely dived down to water from that high 5 meter stand.
my friend saw the water below was dashing to him.
no good posture!

my friend was so much embarrased to see those people keeping on watching and laughing!... and my friends was sad..

Writing Task

Hi friends!

I get some information about be forgiving to other people's mistakes. in this rule can make me become a good person and make me become positive thinking about other people.
  
Rule 6: Share expert knowledge

Finally, after all that negativity, some positive advice.

The strength of cyberspace is in its numbers. The reason asking questions online works is that a lot of knowledgeable people are reading the questions. And if even a few of them offer intelligent answers, the sum total of world knowledge increases. The Internet itself was founded and grew because scientists wanted to share information. Gradually, the rest of us got in on the act.

So do your part. Despite the long lists of no-no's in this book, you do have something to offer. Don't be afraid to share what you know.

It's especially polite to share the results of your questions with others. When you anticipate that you'll get a lot of answers to a question, or when you post a question to a discussion group that you don't visit often, it's customary to request replies by email instead of to the group. When you get all those responses, write up a summary and post it to the discussion group. That way, everyone benefits from the experts who took the time to write to you.

If you're an expert yourself, there's even more you can do. Many people freely post all kinds of resource lists and bibliographies, from lists of online legal resources to lists of popular UNIX books. If you're a leading participant in a discussion group that lacks a FAQ, consider writing one. If you've researched a topic that you think would be of interest to others, write it up and post it. See "Copyright in Cyberspace" on page 133 for a few words on the copyright implications of posting research.

Sharing your knowledge is fun. It's a long-time net tradition. And it makes the world a better place.

in this rule i get some information about how to write it up and post it ?

Please give me a comments freinds

Thank you friend!